Address review comments

Reword the lead paragraph and turn the list items into
complete sentences.
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Gabriel Majeri 2018-09-27 20:25:04 +03:00
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//!
//! ## The need for synchronization
//!
//! On an ideal single-core CPU, the timeline of events happening in a program
//! is linear, consistent with the order of operations in the code.
//! Conceptually, a Rust program is simply a series of operations which will
//! be executed on a computer. The timeline of events happening in the program
//! is consistent with the order of the operations in the code.
//!
//! Considering the following code, operating on some global static variables:
//!
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//! ```
//!
//! It appears _as if_ some variables stored in memory are changed, an addition
//! is performed, result is stored in A and the variable C is modified twice.
//! is performed, result is stored in `A` and the variable `C` is modified twice.
//! When only a single thread is involved, the results are as expected:
//! the line `7 4 4` gets printed.
//!
//! As for what happens behind the scenes, when an optimizing compiler is used
//! the final generated machine code might look very different from the code:
//! As for what happens behind the scenes, when optimizations are enabled the
//! final generated machine code might look very different from the code:
//!
//! - first store to `C` might be moved before the store to `A` or `B`,
//! _as if_ we had written `C = 4; A = 3; B = 4;`
//! - The first store to `C` might be moved before the store to `A` or `B`,
//! _as if_ we had written `C = 4; A = 3; B = 4`.
//!
//! - assignment of `A + B` to `A` might be removed, the sum can be stored in a
//! in a register until it gets printed, and the global variable never gets
//! updated.
//! - Assignment of `A + B` to `A` might be removed, since the sum can be stored
//! in a temporary location until it gets printed, with the global variable
//! never getting updated.
//!
//! - the final result could be determined just by looking at the code at compile time,
//! so [constant folding] might turn the whole block into a simple `println!("7 4 4")`
//! - The final result could be determined just by looking at the code at compile time,
//! so [constant folding] might turn the whole block into a simple `println!("7 4 4")`.
//!
//! The compiler is allowed to perform any combination of these optimizations, as long
//! as the final optimized code, when executed, produces the same results as the one
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//! might hoist memory loads at the top of a code block, so that the CPU can
//! start [prefetching] the values from memory.
//!
//! In single-threaded scenarios, this can cause issues when writing signal handlers
//! or certain kinds of low-level code.
//! In single-threaded scenarios, this can cause issues when writing
//! signal handlers or certain kinds of low-level code.
//! Use [compiler fences] to prevent this reordering.
//!
//! - **Single processor** executing instructions [out-of-order]: modern CPUs are